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ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 2 years ago

Wow, this story is evil. And surprisingly fun. Nice work!

SkanderbegSkanderbegover 2 years ago

As with all of your tales you build great characters and create wonderfully described situations. This could be the launching point for a whole new series.

I have only two minor quibbles, one spelling and the other punctuation. And what makes these stand out to me is the overall quality of your writing.

Thank you for taking the time to write and submit your tales.

Skanderbeg

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Hi, I'm Ash! I write about monsters, demons, and other deliciously scary things. Most of my stories feature corruption, mind control, and transformations, and I put a lot of work into building believable settings and characters. My goal is for you to come for the smut (pun int...