All Comments on 'Lust'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
The Best

This is the best ever.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
same old

you keep writing the same story over and over

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
What's worse: a fucking hack writer or a fucking hack writer that's obviously never been fucked?

Pretty sure it's the latter and this guy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
too brief

This is a well-written romantic story, but too brief. It could have used a slower build up and more character development, and the romantic element certainly could have been enhanced. The dialog is somewhat repetitive, but all in all the story is well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

It's hot.

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