All Comments on 'Lust After Text'

What we need is now a Part 2 where he either divorces his wife and hooks up with his ex sister in law or he shows his wife the way into submission

Had to deduct one star for the 9" cock. As if any woman could take the entire thing, much less a girl that's 5'1" tall. The uterus is rarely more than 6" deep, BTW. It was a good story without that absurdity.

Part 2 please

So, "Ansdguy"...are you sure your name shouldn't be "clueless"?

1, the uterus is also known as the WOMB...which is behind the cervix, and behind the VAGINA. So the length of it is fairly irrelevant since there is a LOT of distance before you REACH it.

2, of course, that doesn't MATTER...to claim that it can't accept more than 6 inches, considering the length of a newborn? Is utterly moronic.

Small tip for the future? When you don't know what you're tallking about? Shut up.

As for the story, I LIKE. Please a part 2, at the least?

Can't wait for part 2

Like 'andsguy,' I had to subtract points for the nine-inch cock. While they DO exist, cocks longer than the 5.5" to 6" average length are rare. Also, 'andsguy' was quite correct in stating that the average vagina seldom exceeds 6 inches in length. And that is during arousal, as the vagina - much like the penis - expands lengthwise and dilates, when a woman becomes aroused. A simple Google search on "average length of the vagina" will bring you plenty of links to such information!

I also had to deduct points for the sheer stupidity of Ally sending photos - with Conner's face in the framd along with Ally sucking his cock - to both Grace and Amanda. The errant photo that either Grace or Amanda sent to Ally, with the two women lavishing attention on one guy's cock, might be sufficient grounds for Conner to use in an adultery-based divorce. The photos that Ally sent will be quite enough for the authorities to use, to send Conner to prison for a very long time, guilty of the crime of incest.

Hey anonymous, ansdguy was partly right most vaginas are only 6 to 7 inches in depth however the way to curve or the way they are shaped allow them to take things much longer. people like to say they go to the base but you still gotta remember even at the base the woman's pelvic bone prevents deep penetration (I assume nature's way of protecting the uterus) which is way many angle hips different ways to get deeper. However I have to agree with you he should read and learn what he's talking about instead of just replying and being wrong and looking like a moron

like you I definitely felt the story damn good and can't wait for part 2

Liked it, hope you add to it. People shouldn't pick it to death, good job!

Wow, you'd think this was a college course on erotic literature. Come on people, give the guy a break. These stories, I thought, were for enjoyment, not to be picked to death as another anonymous so eloquently put it. Don't give up, another one please.

It was a pleasure to read. The story line left me wanting to read more. It would be great to see what Grace and her sister do because of the return text message by Ally. You did create Grace as a nasty piece of work. Perhaps you could have her get her just desserts. And you could further develop the story line to include Mary.

Maybe part two can start out with Grace coming home to an apartment void of everything except divorce papers. She finds out that her bank account is empty and her job fired her off after receiving the pictures. Connor and Alli eloped. I am getting sick of little dick writers making the characters abnormally large but it's whatever.a

Don't stop please, like to see how it ends when Grace comes home

A very hot story that I hope is only just beginning. So much more fun to be had yet.

I liked the story, not one of my favorites but was still at least an 8/10. I don't mean to be that guy but one of my concerns is that why did you make him have a 9 inch cock? That sets the standards a little high, and her reaction is not close to what someone would have at a nine inch cock

Excellent start can't wait to see where you go from here. They have an entire week so it shouldn't be hard for them to enjoy each other.

Revenge sex at its finest. 2 page short, descriptive, disruptive. No sequel needed. Although a little backstory would've been awesome like Conner always noticed want in Ally's eyes and this event finally pushed him to her. Maybe do a follow-up from Ally's POV. Conner and Grace separated, filing for divorce and Ally and him seeing each other. Although still not needed.

great pay back for the scum of the earth whores.

how about chapter 2. what about Mom and aunts reply?

This is his wife's niece, so those bitching about incest being illegal, are technically incorrect. The niece is not his blood relative...so incest doesn't apply

Good story. Well justified incest. No reservations from niece. Good hesitation from uncle.Title explains, lust after text.

Guess you missed the fact that the wife and sister were having sex And eating cum together, or you don't think they touched each other ?

I'm guessing that all these guys complaining about the guy having a 9" cock are just complaining because it makes the story difficult to relate to when your own penis is small. As for "no woman being able to take a 9 inch cock", that's hogwash. Do people think the uterus is made of iron? It stretches people... I have an 8" cock and have never met a woman I couldn't bottom out in. You can feel it stretching like a condom. :)

I loved the story, as I love all of your stories. My one gripe is the constant switching between past and present tense. Do your readers a favor and every time you find yourself writing "I can", replace it with "I could". Please.

No way would he pull out just shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected pussy

Loved reading this one again! :)

Thanks for writing and sharing with us!

loved it, thank you even second time around. There really should be a part two. What did Grace have to say? did he change the locks and keep her out? Do he and Ally stay together?

More please.

Please continue this story. I know it was posted months ago, but so much more to be done still.

As long as there's a part 2 that is... 0_0

Omg this was so good, I hope you make more :)

Good story. End leaves so much hanging. Get us invested in the read just to deal with that ending. Give us little more of the out come. It’s not all about sex. Don’t take this as bad comments. It’s real good story. That is why more is better.

For the complainers: Legality: While the story specifies there in no blood (consanguinity) relationship, this is what is referred to as an Affinity Avunculate Relationship, and is still considered Incestuous in most jurisdictions, and morally and social viewed negatively. So while, people may not view it as incestuous, it still meets the legal definition of Incest.

Decent story premise, but as most of this authors stories, it reads like it was composed on a phone during a 2-3 hour flight, and leaves the reader with an unresolved ending. This story and others would severely benefit from an additional 500 words to fully flesh out the characters and provide for a resolution.

NEEDED ANOTHER CHAPTER TO THIS STORY - ENDING IT WITH THE WHORE WIFE

2 stars - could have been higher rated if he dealt with the whore wife