All Comments on 'Lust in Paradise'

Unbelievably rich and detailed descriptions of male lovemaking. You are an amazing writer. Please do more--especially one from a bottom's perspective.

Fantastic story...VERY hot and well written. You've got me dripping precum all over the damn place! Good work, indeed!

Issues with punctuation, particularly with apostrophes where they don't belong and with missing hyphens. You also have an uncomfortable mix of British and American English.

Pretty hot overall.

You have to continue this story! What happens next?

Helllooo, write the next one please

Please i need you to continue writing i really loved the story and the characters.

To the guy who complained about the story. This is an erotic story site not English Composition 101. Enjoy the story for what it is, a hot story. Don't be so critical.

What's next for these two? Interesting characters. Quite believable circumstances. Maybe another chapter from Jamie's POV? Is he or isn't he? Keep writing please and thanks for a very good story.

that was amazingly written, thank you!

Absolutely amazing,I'm yearning for more,please continue the story.

Absolutely.

Yes

Yes.

Great work!

Thanks for writing it. :-)

You need to continue the saga.:)

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what a hot story.......they are right for each other

I remember having lots of sex with my friend on our vacation.

My sexy roommate and I read the story above. I kicked off my flip flops, and my roommate Alex smiled as he unbuttoned my jeans and slid them down commando me body to my feet. We enjoyed each other in bed like Jamie and the Choirboy author. Many thanks!