by twilghttango
You seem to have covered most of the possibilities but I would still like these more. I loved the explicite descriptions and especially liked the DP.
For a first time story this was very good, furtile imagination.
A good mixture of strong sexy variations Male /Female. Female/ Female
with plenty of sexual exploits
Looking forward to more like stories.
Making lady readers getting wet panties. Men having hard ons
Great descriptive passages, plenty of hot action: well done.
Girls enjoying sharing their husbands, and swapping sperm-filled kisses? Totally unreal, but a very enjoyable story nonetheless. It's too bad real life isn't more like this. Only thing you missed was having the girls go down on each other after the men had filled their pussies with cum. Totally hot.
How can you say it's unrealistic!? If that's what you really believe, I can only feel sorry for you because you are SEXUALLY DEPRIVED. You need to get a life and get out more!