by Yoshimatsu
wow...
just, wow...
this is so beautifully written.
I don't normally comment on anything but i just had to say that this is one of my favorite works I've read.
Your writing is amazing. The combination of excellent construction, grammar etc plus a very creative story, resulted in captivating me. Many thanks. Oh, a nice twist at the end also. Cheers
The story is different and very captivating. While I hope there will be a sequel but I think it's already perfectly good with this ending. Looking forward to your story about the consensual-noncon things you mentioned in the introduction.
I've never seen someone able to captivate me as you have. Bravo. Beautifully written.
What a story. Got me really hot, but my heart sank ar the same time. A very similar thing happened to me.. and I think mosst men would do it, too. Either way, great writing job, I could not stop reading. Thanks :)
I believe there is a point of no return for men. Lee very clearly teased her conquests to that point. The crowning glory is the accusation of rape afterwards. But she knows it isn't! Maybe a sequel where she meets her match?
Very well written and extremely enjoyable. Thank you x
Holy fuck! I couldn’t stop reading even if I wanted to... I love the way you protrayed the result of a man being teased to the point where he has to act. Lee knew exactly want she wanted and how to play him, teasing him, letting him have her only but so far secretly wanting him to defy her and take it further. She reminds me of another girl I know!