All Comments on 'Lust Varied Ch. 01'

by Inkysquid718

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leglover13leglover13over 6 years ago
Nice beginning

Love the story plot. Keep up the seduction. Prefer Dresses and nylons instead of pants. Easier and quicker to have a bare pussy under a dress. Can't wait to read how you seduce Ellie and your Mother.

BG187BG187over 6 years ago
May the harem begin!

Don't you stop this series *****

Turtle1952Turtle1952over 6 years ago
fantastic

by the end of this seris he should be bedding all of them regularly and maybe even knocking a couple of them up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
great begining

have him move in and get them all impregnated and maybe add mom to the circle

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More More More

Would like to see more of this series.

silver77silver77almost 6 years ago
Good story

Well written and exciting story, I enjoyed it a lot. Quite realistic. Thanks

Khaosspawn91Khaosspawn91over 5 years ago
more

id love to read more of this story

DADDYLOVER2DADDYLOVER2almost 5 years ago

I WISH I WAS THERE TO JOIN IN THE KINKY TABOO ACTION! TOO BAD IT IS ONLY IN STORY!

HornyKipHornyKipover 4 years ago
Great story, but....

It was a little hard to follow at times. I had to read a few paragraphs twice to pick it up.

Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Good read.

Believable. I had no trouble following it. Well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
A good start, but need more

I only had one point where it was hard to follow. That was during his initial sit down with his aunt Kathy at the table. she was talking and said..""Listen, Peter, I know this is a huge change in your life. It isn't as if your aunt really wanted to do this. ...." I think possibly at one point you may have thought that conversation should have been between mother and son, and not aunt and nephew.

As a whole this has potential to become very hot. I'm it won't be long until he's fucking both twins and his aunt.

LegallySaneLegallySaneabout 3 years ago

Glad you didn't write ch. 2. The story ran out of steam and got shitty at the end...

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Could have gone farther.

Like Aunt and her daughters jump him together

Or mom wals in on her sister and joins in

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Something tells me that Peter won't be going out for milk anytime soon. He has a barn full of cows at home.

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