All Comments on 'Lustful Energy Ep. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
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You need to have someone proof read for you. This is what I'm talking about. "He lied completely nude on his back as she set at the foot of the bed in the nude as well." What you said was he wasn't telling the truth about being nude.

What you should have said was he laid back completely nude as she set at the foot of the bed already nude. It makes a whole lot more sense and you don't have to reread it to understand what was said.

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