by chriscole12
It took you 5 months and this is what you write. Super disappointed
Its funny that those who choose to critisise never leave a name!.. I though chapter 2 was wonderful and captured your mood and feeling perfectly. Having been along a similar passage myself you must have really enjoyed your time writing it.. so don’t stop due to anonymous comments…I really Enjoyed it. Thanks
Love this story! Now I'm totally horny and disappointed that I can't finish what I started! Please hurry with the rest of the story!
Trust me. There's nothing on earth quite like slipping your dick into your mom. Get him there. Lots of love and respect.
Well I finally read part two and even though it was good I didn't find it as good as the first part sorry now cant wait till part three and pls dont make us wait too long for it this time as part two took you absolutely ages to post thanks
Thanks to everyone who left positive comments. Can’t please everyone! :) The conclusion coming by mid December. I appreciate your patience.
There should be some hot incestuous fucking coming up between Chris and his mom in the next chapter.
I came here to apologize for taking so long on part 3, but you know I just don’t care any more. I’ve tried to ignore the negative comments but I just can’t. Too many people here just want “Joe whips out his cock and rams her pussy and then he cums!” I don’t have the time or inclination to continue writing for these idiots. Sorry to my loyal fans. I’m active elsewhere and you can always check out my adult interactive fiction games.
I really wish you would continue this story I love the build up and suspense. You are an amazing writer and I really hope you chose to continue this series.
Whoever you are, wonderful job!
You keep the build up and tension going, damn it haha it’s driving a lot of us crazy. We want to know the end of it!
Hurry up! Don’t let others get to you, the majority love it!
I see your comment from January about giving up on this site. Sorry to hear it. I’m new here but this story stands out. The seduction is slow—who is seducing whom?—-and you’re leaving some uncertainty about Mom’s ultimate intentions. More erotic than many other stories. Please reconsider.
Dont listen to the haters. its a great story and you should finish instead of leaving it on a cliffhanger :(
Plzzz continue and plzz go slow and add as much as teasing you can more massages and more ass groping daily massages and fucking in climax
What happened to part 3??. Please keep writing. I was really looking forward to the next part as it was just getting interesting..