All Comments on 'Lusting for Mary Ch. 01'

You two weren't close, you were close....she haa a small butt, she has a big ass.....which is it?

and leave out the psssssh, what is she a fucking snake

Damn. Well she had a smaller ass when they were growing up but got thicker now that they met in current time, hence her bigger butt

The thing about first they're not that close, then they were.... Yeah that one was on me. I forgot I started out the story saying they weren't. Damn it.

As for psssh, that's just how she talks.

As usual, great work! 5-stars!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Often step siblings help each other out without going all the way. It can be very beneficial to both in many ways.

"We need to talk... Brother..."

Next Words from her mouth is I am pregnant and its yours.

I was going to demand for the second chapter, until I saw the date it was posted. Haha, silly me. Take your time.

Needs that next chapter awesome 5 star

Still hope for chapter 2.

I enjoyed the story, but it was spoilt somewhat for me due to the number of typos and poor grammar. Next time I'd recommend doing a spell check and reading back through your story a couple of times to eliminate the silly mistakes. Or ask someone on this site to edit for you.

e.g. You wrote:

"We grounded against each other" instead of "we ground against each other"

and:

"I thrusted faster and harder against her" instead of "I thrust faster and harder against her"

Hope that's helpful.

This was a great story please make a second chapter. Good story!!

Great story can't wait for the next chapter, hope you finish he series.

I'm curious what happens next, chapter 2?

Good hope you keep it going!

Best story I’ve read and I’m firing to know how this ends for them.

Please!!!!!! Chapter2