All Comments on 'Luxury Accommodation Ch. 03'

by Whitesocks

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Expectations

Thank you very much, I am glad that you decided continue with the story and hope that there will be a Ch. 04. Before I finish, it's a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Really well done

From the mouths of babes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Excellent

Really have enjoyed where you have taken us with this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Brilliant

This story is brilliant, just the right mix of humour, sex and life.I can't praise the writing enough. Please please write more and then some extra more. (yes I know it's bad english but please just do it) David

Oldergenteman69Oldergenteman69over 9 years ago
Excellent!

I hope you have several more chapters in mind. I enjoyed the humor that was thrown in here and there. Thanks!

MajorRewriteMajorRewriteover 9 years ago
Doesn't get better than this.

Extremely good dialogue. Very witty. The author has professional-level talent. I could happily read dozens of chapters of this.

Good sex scenes too.

oldiethevoyeuroldiethevoyeurover 9 years ago
Excellent

Well written, poignant and very funny - a real winner

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Thoroughly enjoyed this.

Warm sexy funny and engaging. Well done. A great read. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
fabulous story

Professionally written! Loved the dialog, especially a lot the humor....several times I had to stop to laugh out loud. Sex was great also....reminded me of so many times with.my wife. Emma was very.similar to my Diane in that they were such ladies...who would fuck your brains out when turned on. This could turn to a novel.....keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
The Best

I always read stories on this site and by far i think this is the best stories ever written on this site (my opinion). Thank you for a well done job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
realy sad but great at the end

I am a man. I have an older women and when i finished reading i was crying. The story was realy moving me inside. Thank you to bring up my emotions in full gear.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Well done

Truly enjoyed this story. Engaging and a very good read that was filled with emotions. Thanks for the great work!

clippymustdieclippymustdieover 8 years ago
fantastic.

Loved all three sequels, very well done. Especially all the hummer. Loved reading this, and will reread it several times. Five stars, wish it could be eight..

Thanks again. v

sithonsithonover 8 years ago
Lovely story

Great story,it was interesting that they were both so emotionally stunted that they required a child to recognise what they needed and wanted. It was luck that the daughter was so incredibly able, a bit of deus ex machina.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Promise me...

...that you are not a professional writer, because you are good enough to be one. Well, nearly: the plot is good, the writing literate, and it's funny; but you could do well to find how to describe the sex by saying more with less. This probably sounds a bit patronising (sorry about the English spelling), but then so does Chrissy, so there must be some of it deep in the author's psyche!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Wow! What a FANTASTIC story.

It is extremely rare that I get emotionally tied to a story. Its even more rare that I laugh out loud, by myself, when reading. I did both.

Very well written.

BoomerbillBoomerbillover 6 years ago
Love their repartee!

This is a fun and uncommonly articulate reed. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
UNBELIEVABLY GREAT

Sometimes, as I read, it is hard to believe that a human has the expansive knowledge and language skills to form words into such an amazing literary masterpiece.

But Mr. Whitesocks put it here.

So I have to believe.

Paul in Oklahoma

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

It’s May 2022 I just read your whole story and it was fantastic laughed out loud and cried a little. You’re a good writer I know you wrote it a long time ago but it was good you should write some more. The sex was fine which is why we found you but you don’t need sex to write well

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