All Comments on 'Lygon Street'

Amazing story, came quick to this one. Loved the story line and the location. Will probably read again because damn, that was hot!

esp. in the beginning paragraphs. Hated it.

Loved the setting and premise of the tale. The writing is a bit stilted but will improve.

Great to see stories set in Oz.

I'm sure I've been to that restaurant

Why is she engaged to a DWEB?

5 STARTS TO DUMB THE GWEAK.

WE need excitement and sex.

it worked well I liked it . . . . more please

sorry, could not give it better than a 2... :(

I love that I know exactly where this story is set, makes it more intimate, imo.

I hope there will be a sequel!

"5 starts to dumb the gweak". What the fuck is that supposed to mean?

What is a Dweb?

Did you just learn how to use the CAPS LOCK BUTTON?

The story worked for me. The dialogue between brother and sister was perfectly constructed. A sequel would be much appreciated. I love Lygon Street.

As a stand-alone story this is not bad. I would like to see a sequel to learn more about these two. Don't know if it was your plan to write more but this was short and you give intimations of a history between them and it seems likely there will be a future as well. It's not quite fair to pique my interest and then leave me hanging.

If Lygon Street is to be continued please connect the two stories. Thank you.

Thanks for all the feedback. I have some more ideas floating around so we shall have to see if anything involves those two naughty siblings.

...except for trams on Lygon Street and some rather unrealistic dialogue, particularly at the start.

Both story and fuck was short and sweet.

Not a bad story, but a restaurant would have had a bigger ladies room for sure as they always go in two's !

Wasnt that bad at all, like others a sequal would be interesting, cheers 5*

How can his balls be slapping her arse cheeks when he's fucking her doggy?