All Comments on 'Lynn and Leif Forevermore Ch. 10'

by mich80new

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willo_wispwillo_wispalmost 11 years ago
oh noes

homegirl is letting fear and insecuity get the best of her.

Hopefully, Leif wont let her stop them

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
She needs to get over it

I understand reluctance, but I feel like this is getting stuck on the same note for a few too many chapters. I like the chemistry between these characters but wish the story wasn't the same beats over and over again.

mich80newmich80newalmost 11 years agoAuthor
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Anon, I don't want to give too much away, but stick with it, and it'll be worth it, I promise.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
BEAUTIFUL STORY ......

But WAY TOO SHORT! I have every intention on reading all chapters, but this could have been 1 or maybe 2 parts. No biggie!

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