All Comments on 'Lynn's Journeys Ch. 12'

It is obvious to me that Alice & Lynn are falling in love, but I have to say that I think it's fantastic the way you are writing it. I love the realism of it, many people write about love, they have sex, instantly head over heals and going ga-ga over one another. Not realisitic in the least, but with what you've written so far, I love it and thanks! :)