All Comments on 'Lyra's Visitor Ch. 01'

I would like to see where this goes

I always like non-consent with a happy ending, is that possible?

You ever hear of a rape with a happy ending, I don't think so.

I like it so far. It's dark in a good way. I can't wait to read more!!!

i really like this story

great story so far. . . ready for more!

I think this was a great story!! Can't wait to read more, much more...by the way...i've heard of rape stories ending with a very happy ending...always fighting the inevitable...thats the best part...;o) loved it...

im gonna say this plainly and clearly,ellebelle6 your a bitch because i know it dont take months to update,your just writing one chapter but whatever its up to you if want disappoint your readers,me being one o them

i loved this.. dark and dangerous. cant wait for the next chapter

Hi, this is the author, ElleBelle6. I am so grateful for all the comments, and for all my readers. I'm really sorry to tell you that there will not be any more chapters. Unfortunately, this story is very close to home for me, very dear to my heart, and unfortunately my story did not have a happy ending. I have attempted to change the title, to exclude the Ch. 1 part, but have been unsuccessful. I'm sorry it has taken me so long to finally answer the comments, I tried for a long time to write another chapter. Thank you for reading, and for the comments, and the wonderful rating.

-Elle

You should finish it. You're a good writer. I would like to know what happens next. ;)