All Comments on 'Mable's Breasts Pt. 01'

I really enjoyed this little tale. And the tenderness and innocence of both characters.

Sweet story, languorous pacing, the people and lives revealed in a long tease of desire. Looking forward to seeing how everything turns out....

I enjoyed the story quite a bit and look forward to part 2.

You left me hanging!!!!! I can't wait.

Great story!!!

Awesome Story 5 Star

Great story! I love the buildup and how the characters are deveoped. I gave it a favorite point so part two will show up in my feed when it's published. Looking forward to it!

And I feel this is more than a stroke story.

Looking forward to more.

Your writing is fantastic; vivid, and believable. You take the reader with you in an incredible true to life way. If this is fiction, it's amazing. And if it's real, you are one lucky guy.

nice story, sensitive, interesting, good grammar. next instalment please :)

Can't wait for your next chapter

EgQLP7

So well written and intensely sexual, though the characters have barely touched! I can't wait for more-

Very cute, and very well written. Thank you!

Excellent narrative, great build-up

You've begun a very sweet and sensitive story. While I know this is a site for us "sexual perverts", please do not over sexualize this story. It has an excellent beginning.

I was expecting smut and instead found an evoking piece of erotica. I’m very excited to see how this story develops, thank you for sharing this.

Yep I too expected some sort of quick panda story (Eats shoots and leaves) especially at 4 pages long.

As I mentioned on another story I wouldn't normally read stories of this length on this site but I'm so glad I have on the occasion.

Well done, now for CH2

What a lovely story. I'm especially fond of the older woman, younger man scenario and I think you have made a great beginning. I look forward to the next story

This story is a great find. A well-written story with two interesting characters, told in terms which are sweet, tender, sensitive and sexy, yet never crude or base. Fine job.

I love the way the young man's enthusiasm just overflows in this story, and the way you capture the endless fascination of a woman's breasts.

It's a long time since I was a boy that age. But I still find the sincerity of Mable's words so touching: "It's perfectly all right, you know. An erection is nothing to ever be ashamed about. I'm taking it as a lovely compliment." Likewise the innocence with which he comes in his pants and you tell it so simply and directly. Really takes me back to those days!

Sexy and believable.

it's nice to read an encounter that is so gentle. it's building nicely. and the breast stuff was great. nicely done

I, too, have a breast fetish as does your main character. I, too, wank incessantly looking at Milena Velba, Nadine Jenson, Abbi Secara, and any women with huge breasts. Christ, I have over 30 gigs of just photos of every women on the net with big boobs. I lost my virginity to an older woman who used me for just about any sexual experience a man and a woman can have. IO'm sure if I were to go to analysis, I discover what that did to me. But I love who I am and will wank as soon as I finish this comment--viewing a video of Monica East getting up the ass. Keep writing, and I will read part 2.

Fun. Pretty slow!!!!!

Well done; thank you.

I'm looking forward to Mabel's tale.

I truly enjoyed the story. You capture a bit of "teen-like" anguish on some things pretty well. I enjoyed the development of the characters. I have found in every good story I read, a little part of me either identifies or very much wants to be in that situation as one of the characters. This one did it for me too....thanks for a good read. I look forward to more as I read the installments.

Good premise.

Too fast.

Needed more teasing up front.

Three stars.