by Jaymie_dee
Thank you so much for getting part 3 out so quickly. There's nothing more irritating than starting a new story only to wait months and months between each chapter. This chapter was so worth waiting for. The way you described the Michael character made me picture the actor Larry David and Eleanor sounded like Elvira without the big tits. I can't wait to see how Jimmy loses his virginity in chapter 4. Five stars and a favorite point!
I just read the first three stories of this series and am anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
Reading with great interest. This chapter as well as the preceding ones was over too quickly. Keep up the great work.... quickly!! 👍😎
The writing is quite good. It could use a bit of an edit to get rid of excess words. Not sure Part 3 was on a par with 1 and 2 but I am enjoying this. Just don't rush the plot too fast.
I love the new characters, and the development between the man character and Mable. The milking scene was hot as hell. I’m also strangely enough enjoying the development of his stringing along John. I remember being on both sides of that back in high school when a new girl enters the picture 😁.
It really nice and hot. Especially the milk drinking scene. Looking forward to see how it goes for Jimmy's first time. Also would love to see a hot cheerleader thrown in the mix and how Jimmy's would handle her. A threesome with Mable, cheerleader and Jimmy would be v hot especially if Mable and Jimmy take her virginity. Waiting for the next part.
I can't seem to get enough of this story. Great character selection. Can't wait for part 4.
A nice interlude on a lighter note. I smile at the way one's morals and values flex when sex is in the offering.... From the high honour of refusing Eleanor's come-on to the down and dirty voyeuristic pleasure of stealing her dirty movies :-)
Erotic massage videos featuring Rita.
If based in reality, I'm guessing the beautiful and sensual Rita Argiles (aka Rita Peach).