All Comments on 'Mable's Breasts Pt. 04'

That was absolutely wonderful! I wondered how this chapter would go and I'm so glad that it was romantic and sexy and not sleazy. I only wish that this was an Illustrated story as I'd love to see what Mable looks like. I can't imagine how you're going to make Jimmy's mom accept this relationship, though. Maybe you can have Mable invite Jimmy and his mom over for dinner to discuss the computer business so they can finally meet. They can become friends and see how things develop from there. Five stars and a favorite point!

Very well written and very yummy too! I can't wait to read more of this story! Thank you!

Really great story. Could not wait to read it and did not disappoint. Looking forward with anticipation to part 5.

I love your writing style... the way you narate and build up the story.... not sleezy or vulgar... but sensual and HOT!!! Please continue with part 5, 6, 7, 8 ... ;-) it´s a beautiful love story... also wondering how Jimmy´s Mom is going to to accept it, but I imagine she will be OK with it as she loves her son... looking forward to next Friday for Part 5 (seems like the chapter are every Friday ;-) ) Congrats on your writing Jaymie-dee !!!

keep it up good read ......thank you

Its wonderful how it is shaping. I loved the way you romantically created the love scenes. It was v touching. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter. Also would like to see a miracle with her becoming pregnant and then how he would handle his mom' and friends.

I have been reading literotica for years. This is the first time I have ever made a comment on here. Really like this story and the way it has been illustrated. Been waiting and looking forward to each chapter.

Beautiful and creative. Keep going

Keep it going! I sense an opportunity for a baby in the mix soon, since Mable has a "small" chance of getting pregnant, as opposed to having a hysterectomy to make it impossible. Good writing! 5*.

One of the best series on Lit that I've ever read! Very, very hot love scenes!

Great story. I keep checking for the next one. Thank you for sharing.

Very good story so far. I to wonder about the possibility of Mable becoming pregnant.

I'm not sure if this is the right forum to respond to all of the wonderful comments about my story. But I want SO much to thank you all for your positive feedback, it means the world to me and I appreciate it more than I have words. I will respond individually via email jaymie_dee@yahoo.com should anyone desire to do so...but THANK YOU ALL from the bottom of my heart

Every time I click on the Mature category hoping for an update to this story and it’s there feels like a mini miracle! The level of anticipation you’re building is intense and you have never let us down. This chapter was pivotal, as you had been building towards this moment the entire time and it couldn’t have been more satisfying. I even loved the whole build up to his arrival at Mables house, his interaction with his mom and the scene at his gaming buddies house. Thank you again for creating and sharing this with us.

Keep up the great read! If there is to be more I can't wait to read them!

This is the first story I have EVER given a 5 star rating to, which is saying something.

The relationship developed naturally from the start and is true for both characters. I know that the whole thing is fictional(?), but I sincerely hope that things work out for Mable and James, even to the point of wedding bells and the proverbial "happily forever after".

Don't feel any need to rush or sensational any episode, for I will be here until the story reaches its natural conclusion someday.

Have been thought out really well and then written and presented with style and grace.

Lovely and juicy thank you. I found the instant falling in love a bit cheesy, but then who is logical after a hot sexual experience like that?

I am really enjoying the stories, keep up the writing.

this may be one of the best story lines I've read on here. the characters are great and the sex is beautiful. other lit writers could learn from this.

I like the story quite a bit. I'd always like to linger a bit more on her nipples, how she dresses, and teasing. But that's my prejudice I take to the stories I write. Lots of teasing is very nice. Maybe someone else can join in with somewhat smaller breasts like a D, or DD? Huge, for me is a bit overwhelming, but this is very nice nonetheless.

The more I read this story, the more I am enjoying it. Not the usual wham, bang, thank you ma'am. It has so much feeling. I am looking forward to the further episodes.

Very, very erotic story

A really beautiful, well written and highly erotic story. Well done!

One of the most sensual and wonderful stories I have ever read. You make the characters so real and the situation really very believable in most areas. I truly love the way the story is unfolding....and probably like most guys wish there had been a " Mabel," in MY life! Thanks for writing...I will enjoy other installments I am VERY sure.