Mack's Progress Ch. 06

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The extra light entering the room from the open door must have attracted their attention and they both stopped mid-move and looked in my direction. I saw the recognition on Lindsey's face at about the same instant that I realised that it was she. Her eyes seemed to get very large before they vanished as I closed the door again as quietly as I had opened it.

With determination in my step I followed the same route Conway's wife had taken down the corridor. Only I didn't turn into the function room, I headed for the reception desk where I retrieved my key and told the girl behind it that I was not to be disturbed, unless World War Three broke out, or the hotel was burning down.

Then I went to my room vaulting up the stairs, three at a time. Once inside I locked the door retrieved the bottle of Rum I'd brought with me, just in case, and then turned out the light.

End of chapter 6

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RanDog025RanDog025about 2 years ago

EXCELLENT! 5 BIG FAT FLUFFY TWINKLING STARS!

Artie88Artie88about 4 years ago
Pigheaded and then some

A true nutcase is our Mack!!!

Wonderful. Good job keep him in character.

It gets a bit much with all the bed swapping, etc. at the pub, but very good story.

BetterEndingBetterEndingover 6 years ago
Too Far

Now you have stretched both the coincidences and Mack's stupidity past the limit.

tO1kmhq5apoPRPwxtO1kmhq5apoPRPwxalmost 9 years ago
1*

BULLSHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Arrgh!

I have mixed emotions. Part of me thinks how could anyone act this stupidly and yet I know I might well do the same. Also, I am enjoying the story too much to want a quick conclusion.

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