All Comments on 'Macy Sheds Another Inhibition Ch. 04'

So now your wife and you are officailly swingers. Well that was a surprise wasn't it? Of course it wasn't. From the first story you wrote of of your 'shy' wife taking things further each time you have traveled down a track that will end up with a train wreck. You don't really think your wife will be satisfied with just you from now on do you? She has tasted both male and female. And you have a kid somewhere. I don't think either of you will stop there. The next step will be a swingers club or swinger parties. I hope you enjoy your knew lifestyle. Apparently many people do. I can't see the appeal of it myself. I like making love to one woman, my wife, just as she likes making love only to me. And that will never change. Well goodbye I don't wish you luck because you wouldn't want it and don't need it.

I did not know that you belong to those who deliberately and with fun destroy marriages. wow what a nice add to your sexual high. Bob said no and you let the guy still fuck Debbie. Not only that. the 2 woman decided not only to cuckold Bob no, even worse, to impregnate Debbie. So already 2 possibilites to destroy that marriage. if he ever finds out about Debbie fucking the other guy and she was very willing and still will be at home, to fuck another guy. she will tell Bob who was first when the marriage is ending in a divorce. and this marriage is over because of Macy and the guy with no name (mostly called me). he might find some way to get back at the couple who he thinks is guilty. even more so if he finds out he is raising a bastard of "me" which will most likely be the case in the us. Almost all schools do DNA on the kids in case of an accident when the kid would need a blood transfusion. they have to nowadays for insurance reasons. I hope that this will add to your sexual-satisfaction. interim balance sheet: one couple down, a new whore created, a bastard in progress who has to find his life starting with only one parent and a lot of different fathers to come home. who doesn't know his real father . and he has to carry the burden that his mother and the other couple should carry. + a lot more couples to destroy and more bastards to father in the future. very nice. oh I forgot, eventhough you won't care at all. minus one reader for you Agoodman954, in your balance sheet. Maybe even more, I guess most don't even write a comment after chapter 4

I would have punched my wife in the face and broken her nose like I do mine..these women know and love a good beating now and than

I liked the story, unlike some of the moralists that seem to want to visit this site all the time - sort of hypocritical of them I believe. Anyway, keep writing. Interesting series.

And not much of a man, glad I don't know you.

Nice story. You've got a rich vocabulary, but once in a while it seems overdone, almost to the point of cloying. The whole text needs reediting, and I would hope that the editor indicates where the insertion of commas and hyphens is needed for clarity of expression. You've got some great phrases, beginning with "clicking a casual cadence." A few of your purple adjectives are inappropriate, such as the "opulent thin material." Finally (apart from typos), you consistently show you do not know the past tense of "to lie." It is lay, not laid.

Believe me, I loved the story.

I like happy endings, and stories that have a lot of sex in them, so it was a good story to me. Thanks for the good post.....Rich

Oh LIGHTEN UP !! If you don't like my stories then don't read them. Have we headed down a path of predition and ruin to a train wreck? NOT YET. Macy and I are very happy and we will continue to enjoy ourselves as long as we both agree to do so. Debbie and Bob were going to go to a sperm bank and get a donation instead Debbie MAY... MAY have gotten it from me. OH MY GOD we are all doomed! Imagine that a loving couple has a child with the donation of sperm ... so to speak. And it's not like he should be shocked if he does ever find out. He didn't mind putting his hard cock in my wife's beautiful mouth and between her full breasts. OK so yes he may be pissed if he ever finds out but that wasn't my issue or mindset at the time.

Your kids get DNA tests at school? What supper max prison do you live in? You don't need a DNA test to get a blood transfusion and even if you did they wouldn't do it at school. Oh and by the way my Great Grandfather lived to be 92, my Grandfather to 95 and my father is 72 and plays tennis three times a week when he's not swimming or playing golf,and I'm in great health. I've never had a serious illness and I have an above average IQ.

As for the asshole that thinks I should punch my wife in the face and break her nose, like he does to his wife. You belong in jail taking your proper possition in this world. Bent over holding your ankels and being Big Bubbas bitch.

OK that being said there is nothing wrong with... opulent thin material. Webster's Dictionary describes opulant as , extremely rich, profuse, luxuriant. That sure sounds like silk to me. However thank you very much for the constructive criticism. And thank you ALL for taking the time to read my stories. There will be more on the way.

Signed ... The Man With No Name... I can hear him screaming now ... Who are you! LMAO

Did you perhaps mean "predation"? Maybe it was "predication"? I'm thinking you may have meant to say "perdition". My point is, if you want to be understood and accepted as a writer/author, you absolutely have to get your grammar, punctuation, and by all means your spelling in check. Otherwise your effort becomes a joke and you set yourself up for ridicule. On the other hand, you did set yourself up for mockery with your choice of subject matter. It’s all fine and dandy to say “if you don’t like it, don’t read it”...but how am I, as a reader, to know whether or not I do if I don’t critique? You asked for commentary, but then when it was not to your liking you came undone. There are so many inconsistencies in your stories that it seems contradictory to me, and your outburst makes one wonder about the condition of your real life relationships in comparison to your virtual life. I’m willing to bet, as happens with most voyeurs, that the real relationship (if indeed there actually is one) doesn’t even come close, which makes me suspicious of your proclamation of having true happiness in your life with “Macy”. Temper tantrums are so unbecoming...Tsk Tsk

My aren't you quick to respond when hiding behind a cloak of anonymity. You are right on a few points. My punctuation is not one of my strongest suite, yes I did mean perdition, as a description of our pending damnation, and yes you do have to read my stories to critique them. I am also interested in knowing what you consider to be the contradictions in this story. However it shows your definite narcissistic tendencies as you assume that all my comments were directed at you. The "if you don't like don't read it" comment was directed at the gentleman (also anonymous) who wrote the commentary entitled Same Old Same Old. He referred to my description of Macy in the first story I wrote, and about her subsequent actions in other stories. That he seems believe is taking us down a continuing path of degradation. Now I have written ten stories, if you didn't like the first nine why read the tenth, or for that matter any of my future stories? As for setting myself up for ridicule anyone who writes a story here is going to get that. Just because there are some people who have a predilection for ridiculing others. How many times have you heard some one say... oh he should have caught that, or he should have hit that when watching a game. Oh yeah cup cake step up and take a shot. It's not as easy as it looks, and neither is writing. That being said if were I a literary scholar would I be writing these stories so you could assess, dissect, and criticize them? No, I am an amateur .... as in someone who does something for the love of it, and I strive to become better so here I am. Oh and one more thing that was not a temper tantrum. Perhaps I need to work on my skills a little more, that was supposed to be sarcasm. I have an idea for anyone who would like to continue this conversation e-mail me with a return e-mail address and we can continue in a better venue. Thanks again to everyone who has taken the time to read my work I honestly appreciate it.

For your information I have not read all your stories, Why would I? I have only been curious to see where you and your wife take this swinging journey you have started. Personally I couldn't give a rats ass how you write your stories. With this chapter of your current story you have reinforced what I guessed would happen at the start of your stories. I only read the first couple of chapters and then only breifly dipped into other chapters. In fact I don't think I have read a full chapter. Don't worry now I can see your true colours of what you and your wife have become I simply do not care what you do anymore. Personally I wouldn't do anything that you have done. I certain wouldn't watch my wife doing the things your wife has done. But then you don't really care what we think anyway. You will continue to go further with your chosen route which is sharing your wife with others and you joinging in occasionally when she lets you. As for emailling you? What for? There is nothing you can say that will change my mind and I will not stop or hinder you in your march to sharing your wife with many others.

I'm not usually a fan of swinging stories, but this was a fun read. Could use some editing, but I think you already know that. Anyway, great effort, overall. Looking forward to your next efforts.

it cant be that there are so many folks out there that hate a hot woman like macy. i bet if they saw her the moral squad would fade. great writting by the way, i'm so moist so i'm thinking you should write me as i would love to show you my tits, for the haters go read something that will make you happier, kisses shanny

Don't let the turkeys get you down. ***

Wonderful and very sexy! Thanks for pointing out where to find this. But I did and I love it!

I truely enjoyed your story but found the ending a little disturbing.

Good story! Sounds like Macy keeps life interesting, gotta love that! Thanks for sharing this one!

where is the continuation?

Bob seemed a bundle of nerves Debbie very nice, I can't get over you and Macy ..Wow you are both sweet and very youthful and adventurous. You descriptions don't go into a fraction of detail that goes into Macy's. Wow Macy sounds like a mind wrecker in a good way. My first wife was voluptuous and I was always nervous about protecting and pleasing her when I was very young. I was also very immature and couldn't contain myself around other man. When think about it now it was quite ridiculous. I guess through maturity you grow with it and you work you intellect and emotions with eachother til you feel a comfort of knowing. The not knowing and self doubt is the big bummer. If a person truly loves you in a mutual emotional assent it the best thing you ever know.

Your stories I have read are drooling with the love I previously mentioned and you both seem quite comfortable in your own skins. The pain of love is that aching insecurity that you constantly crawl to inspect eachother for reaffimation. I hope you guys never lose your momentum and fight to keep this precious thing going. If you start a fan club count me in. Thank you so much on the 5th read of this magnicent story/adventure.

I really like this story series. It was both erotic and fun. The only thing that I would improve would be editing, especially not mixing up loose and lose. Great job!

It seems to me that you wrote to enhance Macy's experiences, and aside from not fucking Bob you put her through a range of sexual play.

Those moralists who criticize Macy giving Bob a blow job should read and understand the meaning of the category "Loving Wifes." If one complains about a cheating wife, although in this contest she was not cheating, then one should read Romance or Erotic Coupling categories.

Thanks for a great series of stories.

I loved the story, the scene setting and the buildup. The only thing I found just a bit unrealistic was that Debbie seemed to convert a bit too quickly from a shy, conservative, strait-laced wife into an uninhibited woman who let Macy's husband fuck her in the ocean. Those inhibitions should have melted away slightly more slowly. Otherwise, a fine tale well told!

I'm curious. What's your native language? It surely isn't American English. Sentence structure, spelling, and punctuation make that pretty obvious. That said, while it gets in the way of reading the story smoothly, it is still a good story. Thanks for writing and submitting it.

I hope Macy told Debbie what her husband's blood type is. One other thing. I feel you are trying too hard with the descriptive adjectives. "Causing her to quiver with salient ecstasy." You don't need salient.