All Comments on 'Maddie's Treasure'

Nah. But someone else may like it.

seemed like a dash to the end after the buildup of the first few pages. Not really my cup of tea, but somehow it kept me until the end...

Great story would love to see more on them!

I loved it please continue this and to let us follow their journey wherever it may lead.I would like to hear more about Vivians past.

More, much more, love this story.

I'm torn on this story. The kinky uncle and aunt plant the seed of the story, but then are forgotten after a page. The dead parents develop Ava, but I didn't see the necessity of it, all the extra bits about daily life didn't pay of in the end. I say all this because the ending was incredibly rushed and a bit of a letdown after reading 6 full pages of build up. I was really enjoying the Vivian character (experienced mentor) but the reward simply never appeared.

But I'll happily read more in the future.

I never knew this scenario could be so exciting. I must have lead a closeted life or never had the opportunity. good storey, pretty good Englsh and well written. excellent.

I have already commented on this storey yesterday but having slept on it realise the ending is unfinished. there must be a second part surely??