All Comments on 'Maddy, Beth and the Professor'

I gave it five stars, each well deserved!

Prostitution for grades isn't non-con.

You have set the scene nicely for further adventures, blackmail etc.

Wonder what happens with the paternity test in 9 months though ??

Please continue this story!

Great intro, I hope you bring these characters together again, either in pairs or the trio..

This is a well-worn scenario, and this story really doesn't add anything new. Nonetheless, it is very well written, and undeniably hot. This is what some might call NonCon light, but I think that is far more interesting than anything involving forcible rape. For me, the best stories in this category are those where the victim has to make a choice, and the chosen alternative is sex. You have a clean, engaging style of writing that is easy to read. Beth and Maddy are both interesting characters, and for the most part you do a good job of keeping their personalities distinct. Threesomes are hard to write, and this one succeeds without becoming klunky. One of the better first efforts I have read recently.

This is just me, but I would have skipped the long intro with the detailed descriptions of the trees and buildings and started with this sentence:

"School had been in session for a little more than a month in the small college town, and Maddy was on her way to her first class of the morning."

then gone straight to this one:

"It was Maddy's second year in college.."

In fact, there's a lot of unnecessary detail about leaves and grass etc. throughout and you might want to pare it down a bit.

Well written even if the story line is well tried.

Keep more coming