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Sonnyw55Sonnyw55over 3 years ago
Love It!!!

Love this story!11

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Amazing

Mmh this was such a delicious story!

oldsage_1oldsage_1over 3 years ago

Been awhile but that one was worth waiting for! Simple, straight forward and hot as hell! Enjoyed every line of that fantasy. Looking forward to your next post. Hell, you could just extend this one a few more pages....er..chapters but I try not to lead the author! ;-) You guys/gals have the talent I just get to enjoy your creations!

5 Stars (wish I had more).

Cheers

SAGE

dnnudism64dnnudism64over 3 years ago

Nice story, I liked

BlossomflowerBlossomflowerover 3 years ago
Oh god this makes me hot

This got me off so many times reading this

Celeste1967Celeste1967over 3 years ago
Very hot

Similar to my experience with my dad, I loved it.

shang40shang40over 3 years ago

Lucky daughter Lucky Dad

surface6669surface6669over 3 years ago

That dirty perverted bastard! She barely knew him& he wanted her from the first moment that he saw her! Lucky fucking bastard! ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

FUCKING HOT! I imagined my own daughter while reading this; fucking her like that...she always wears tight short-shorts around the house with half her ass cheeks hanging out, teasing me to taker her and bend her over the nearest piece of sturdy furniture and ball slap her ass until I shoot jet after jet of hot sticky jism right into her cervix!

Thank you for the story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I prefer a more passive role for the dad. This is a young girl with a ton of trauma. When he kinda becomes the aggressor right before the final page it took me out of it. 99% of the time I like a bold take charge man. In daddy daughter or older brother younger sister scenarios I can't enjoy taking advantage of a mentor position unless "it just happened" or the woman is the aggressor, because she just loves him so much.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

What if the moms bf came and double team her

Nekomusume_DaisukiNekomusume_Daisuki12 months ago

Nice one... Went a tad too fast at the end, but still...

And to the Anonymous commentor 27 days ago... No, just no! That guy is not cool!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

This one was a bit disturbing, not gonna lie. The poor girl clearly has issues, wanting to feel loved so badly she'll do just about anything for affection. She is abused emotionally, trading sexual favours for the slightest hint of affection. No surprise she's a bit of a slut (though the author does have a habit of rendering the females as sluts). Then the dad basically turns her into his live-in slut and, of course, she's all too eager, desperate for the affection she's always sought. Yeah, it's pretty hot and what not, but it's also kind of really fucked up - and not in the good way, sadly :(

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Just a guy who likes writing naughty stories about loving relatives. I hope you like them. Don't hesitate to send feedback. I love to know what you think, and I'll always do my best to reply if you include your email. Please note: I'm going to do my best to remove any slut sh...