All Comments on 'Madison Ch. 04'

This one took me by surprise.

I sincerely hope there will be many more.

That was a super Chapter that you wrote. I like how you had Sara tell Pete the story about her brother Danny and her friend Julie and how they got together that one weekend. The scenes were beautiful and well-written. I can hardly wait for the next chapter that you write. I would love to see Sara and Madison get-together for fun night of sex. I would also love to see how you write Pete with his other sister Tricia.

If she was so into that stuff, why wouldn't she give any of that up for her husband? Her supposed true love? That's more of a betrayal right there.

Yes, anon, your feeling is correct about it. The author agrees. Keep reading...

Well written and the story has real merit, keep going please