All Comments on 'Madison Ch. 05'

That was another fabulous Chapter you wrote about Madison, her brother, Tricia and Sarah. I like how you describe the sex between the four of them and how the brother took his youngest sister Tricia to his bathroom and they went into the shower together. I can hardly wait to read the next chapter and how you develop things with these characters.

Loved it . Your writing paints a picture in the mind, a 3D picture with the reader in on of the main roles.

this is a fantastic story hope there will be more to cum

Great story !!!! Good writing ioved the story line please write more

I have read alot of stories under the incest banner. This is my favorite. Great sex with a believable story and character develpment ... nobody was perfect in any way, shape or form; everyone had human flaws. I enjoyed the series immensely and look forward to reading the rest of your submissions.

a very good story. told very well - and very sexily. wish you had written more!!!