All Comments on 'Mae Day'

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spurtmanspurtmanalmost 4 years ago
A fabulous story!

Just an exquisitely erotic, spontaneous story which certainly aroused me first thing this morning! Bravo!

Cincy58Cincy58almost 4 years ago
Thanks

Thanks for sharing your story. I would have enjoyed meeting Mae like this, but may have enjoyed the smaller breast of an Asian woman. Some HOT STUFF here...thanks again👍

TheBusinessManTheBusinessManalmost 4 years ago
Keep writing

I enjoyed this. Please submit more.

linnearlinnearalmost 4 years ago
So Hot

That was incredibly hot and a great quick read.

BetarianBetarianalmost 4 years agoAuthor

Thank you for the nice comments, guys. It was a fun story to write, and actually had some elements of truth to it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I thought it remarkable that the protagonist apparently also stands about 4'11", since he's grinding crotches w/the 4'11" woman. And her breasts, which are so huge they must be at her stomach and chest, are squashed against HIS stomach and chest.

I knew a 5' shorty once, her boobs touched my erection when we made out standing up and she didn't need to bend over much to kiss it. If she'd had anything more than D cups, they would've squashed against my groin. Other than that, sweet story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

When will there be a part 2? And illustrated version...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago
excellent, but too short!

This excellent story has great characters to go with the wonderful storyline, but it is much too short, and a sequel (better yet, sequels) is badly needed.

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