All Comments on 'Maelstrom'

Does not get much better than another Max Pemberton detective story. Love following the winding path. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Can't wait for Maelstrom Part 2

Loved it can't wait for part two,I hope she and Lesley eventually get together.

Nice Sam Spade type of story!!

Can it get any better than to show up and find another Max story?

I'm always up for the next Max episode. Don't read anything into that, please.

Loved It!!! going to read the stories in the order from page 1 - can't wait thanks for writing

I can't believe I almost missed this. Looking forward to more stories about Max.

I've been saving this one for a few days and couldn't wait any longer. Another excellent Max adventure. You write so well. Thank you.

Fabulous ...... Your tales are outstanding ...... But yeah give Max some to love coming home and not only fried chicken ....... You are so talented and able to draw me into your scripts like being a part of it

So ten stars minimum 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟💋🍀

This has to be one of the best stories on the site. It felt like I was reading a short film - a vignette of someone's life. Can't wait for more.

Oh wow, what a great start to the story, came to this story because I clicked on another story stating although not necessary reading these stories first for background is advised… I am not disappointed. It felt like I was reading an actual crime book with a bit of naughtiness thrown in, rather then just a story to get my rocks off!!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Definitely looking forward to reading about the rest of Max’s adventures.

Wow… a wonderful start to the Max Pemberton series. I started reading Jackknifed wherein you recommended starting with this…

Thank you

Noir. Really evocative of the classics, except the sex is more explicit and more frequent. I can't wait to begin reading the other stories of Max and her adventures. "Here's lookin' at. you, kid!"

Worrying, really, but I guess apparently heavy drinkers don't need to know or care that the Macallan is not a whiskey. The difference is... well, poor research I suppose.

A bit pedantic I know, but what else might be incorrect?

Macallan is a single malt Scotch whiskey. I've had it. It's good.

To the previous Anon: since pedantry is the order of the day, The MacAllan may not be a "whiskey" but it is a "whisky", a very fine and costly Speyside single malt Scotch whisky.

Just so everyone gets it - take notes, there will be a test later - The Macallan is a Scotch whisky, that is from Scotland. Whiskey (note the 'e') is Irish (try Bushmills or Jamesons), while bourbon (note the spelling) is American whiskey (apparently with an 'e') and also a type of biscuit (much less alcohol).

Please show your workings...

The story, much better than the screw up about the drink...

I really enjoyed the story and look forward to more.

But that early misattribution or misspelling bugged me all the way through. The Macallan is a fairly popular brand of good single malt Scotch whisky (more so outside Scotland). as previously noted in Scotland we use the spelling w-h-i-s-k-y for our own aqua vitae -- whiskey is for non-Scottish distillates.

First off, 5 stars. I look forward to the rest of the Max Pemberton saga.

There is another discrepancy that, I believe, is far more serious and of far greater consequence than "whisky" versus "whiskey." I've been beating a drum to exhort Literotica authors to improve the technical caliber of their writings by observing, mastering, and applying correctly the difference between the intransitive verbs "to lie" (lie/lying/lay/lain) and "to rise" (rise/rising/rose/risen) and their transitive counterparts "to lay" (lay/laying/laid/laid) and "to raise" (raise/raising/raised/raised).

Excellent. This shows writing skills of a level way above anything else that I have read on this site. I look forward to all the follow ups on my heroin Max!

I loved it!