by NebulaDeism
Thank you for the feedback, I love seeing people enjoy my stories, I have some interest in continuing this story so I may write another part if I have the time
Well, I was going to give this a 5 star rating but the ending spoiled it for me. Forcing her to give her first blowjob and having her exposed and humiliated like that will get her kicked out of school and arrested in short order. I could understand the first guy taking pictures outside of the room as perhaps being part of the group blackmailing her but taking her clothes and leaving her naked with her hands behind her back with all of those guys taking pictures was taking things too far for her first time. Yeah, a bit of humiliation and such for her would be appropriate but not taken to this extreme. At least that is my opinion.
Okay Anonymous, well after rereading I think you're right maybe it was a bit too far fetched. If I write a second part I'll try to make it more grounded and realistic. Thank you for your input and if anyone else agrees please don't hesitate to let me know, I appreciate all feedback
I really enjoyed this story. Well written ENF. I’m in a little agreement with the ending being somewhat unrealistic, but not so much that it broke suspension of disbelief (at least in this genre). As a one-shot it works, but if she loses her
clothes every time she’s summoned she’ll quickly have no wardrobe left and not much for sequels :-/. I hope there is a followup.
This is a really fun idea and I hope you do more. Though the premise sort of gets ruined in her very first experience as she's immediately exposed and has pictures taken of her by people not involved in the agreement. If this were based in any sense of reality she would have been exposed to the entire school with the pics/vids taken by the people outside the dorm room by the time she even got back to her place. They would have spread around the school like wildfire and the whole point of her being in a secret submissive sex club kinda gets tossed out the window.