by Dinsmore
Out of the park impressed with your imagination and talent.
You have moved the personal achievement bar much higher in a story which entertained, was sensual, and most of all didn't disrespect any character or the readers in my eyes.
Super work - thanks for your time, talent and discipline!
With High Regard
The story covered all the bases and gave a great shot for doing things above board.
I thoroughly enjoyed the build up to the realistic end.
Look forward to more stories of this caliber, which I think is very high.
the best i have read so far.....fabulous. a great sexy story and yet without the boring and repeating ........ know what i mean? hope to read more of this in future.
This one hell of a hot story. It's sultry in all the right places without becoming digustingly graphic for no purpose.
but how the heck did he serve in vietnam if he was only 35? other than that detail a good story
Nowhere in the story does it say that it takes place in the present. Therefore, Steve's age at the time of the story is not an issue.
One of your early stories which I don't remember reading before. It certainly is a precursor for many of the wonderful stories you have written.
Boyd
Believable characters that even grew some during the story. What a beautiful matchup of two rare exceptional people with profound intellects, creativity, social abilities & awareness, savoir faire, good taste & breeding. Also, your knowlege of their W.A.S.P. upper middle class culture (& presumble faith view & approach to the World), is highly observant & wonderfully brought out in the story. To me both protagonists came off as very real, & human. Quickly, both of them, realised that their latest relationship was substantially different than the mass of relationships. Both, now, were ready for serious commitment, family, & settling down. (both dearly wanted children). Your description of the events in that corporate culture was excellent. Written upon the backdrop of precipitous change, & reorganisation. All in all a delightful story, romanic, erotic, with a happy ending. Congratulations on a superb job well written.
Please continue posting your work on this site. As a favour to all your admiring readers. I suspect that you are already a successful writed published elsewhere under a pseudenom. All the best for 2009. :::: Dan.
that I cannot find any new praises - just absolutely TERRIF romances.
Thank you, Dinsmore, I hope to read lots more of the same character.
I really loved this story! You made it sexy and sweet at the same time. Great Job!
That was another fun read with good people living well -
Good story. Maybe a bit over-sexed at the end, but it was neat and nice. After all, this is an erotic Romance, is not it?
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet and forever), is not my native language.
One doesn't have to go by the direct route, but may have a detour! Perfectly written and just enough character development to grip the reader! Not the average literotica story - thank you for sharing your thoughts with us!
Poor spelling, changes in point of view, a completely unbelievable plot and her total capitulation to mommy-dom made this far less entertaining than I hoped for. 3*
This is an epic in a treatise on marketing and sales, customer and staff relationships, as well as managing personal relationships within a corporate culture. Loved it! Thanks for sharing, for me it becomes a great Memorial Day memory.
Wonderful love story, story is well written with great character development. Gets my 5 star score
Pretty good, not as good as Taking Command or A Man among Women but still a good romance story. Just wondered why the were married for 3 months ? before she told her parents and didn't have a big church wedding or even a private ceremony with both sets of parents as the characters both hinted at strong family values.