All Comments on 'Maggie Gets It: For Halloween'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
5*

Fucking love this mate!!!!

linnearlinnearover 3 years ago
Great

Very good. It seems like he knew it was her and almost called her Maggie, I was hoping she took the helmet off.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Yesssss love it. I wont to know wgat happens tho . would love it to be more. I need to know what the brother does. And thinks.

bshell47bshell47over 3 years ago
Exciting.

Good story.

A little implausible, but still a good story.

How about a follow up when she gets caught!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
He knows

Unless he's retarded, he knows.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I would think he knows too. Maybe we'll see part 2 soon?

baruch98baruch98about 2 years ago

Another chapter for this story?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

WHERE THE FUCK IS PART 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Not to be that guy, but this should definitely be in non-con. Impersonating someone's lover to have sex with them is rape.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

how didn't he know is was his sister whenshe spoke

WrittenbyMonkeyWrittenbyMonkeyover 1 year ago

He knows for sure, he stopped himself calling her Maggie.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

this needs a part two where he finds out!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Enjoyed your story. Please consider writing a sequel.

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11/21/23 - Fucking Magic 15 Submitted. Hopefully in time for Thanksgiving. Part 16 is a real evolvement and is finished and half edited. The series might go to Part 18 or 17 might be really long with an Epilogue. 9/6/23 - Fucking Magic 14 submitted and coming at you in the n...