All Comments on 'Magic Dress Pt. 04'

I hesitated to add this chapter, as I thought some readers might be disappointed or annoyed at the lack of sucess, and wondered if I should have left Part 3 as the finish, which was my original story. However the characters seemed to want to try something and I let them.

There will be more Magic Dress stories mostly including a more successful move on the journey to womanhood, as will be indicated by the female names they adopt. There is no one single experience, and few of them are easy. The first one we will meet is Jane.

I really liked the first three parts of Magic Dress, but the fourth chapter was not as compelling a read. The emphasis on names and identity / name-changing seemed to take away from the overall arc, so far, of the story. But hey, that's my humble 2 cents.

You are a creative, talented and imaginative writer. This is a great series.

xoxo,

Di

I've enjoyed the stories wishing a wife could help me be more! Eve is a very helpful lady and Jean has been an angel for all!