All Comments on 'Magic, Love, Family Pt. 01'

I read this when it was first published, great story then as it is now. I was disappointed when it was left hanging just when it was getting interesting. Glad you found your site way back to it.

So far so good. I'll follow the story to seehow things will develop.

Loved it, keep going...

Let's see how things develop further into the story.

I felt like deja vu I remembered reading this story before, then saw in comments one more person read this too lol.

I also remember reading but never got past his awaking. been trying to find it to finish reading. so looking forward to rest of story. Really enjoyed it.

I like the story so far. Good build up and good characters. I look forward to reading more. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Been awhile since I read the original, But this seems different. It's the same but I feel like a lot of stuff is missing from before. Maybe It will come up in later chapters. Glad your putting it back up though, thanks!

I had read all that was posted before as "Come Closer, My Love" and was eagerly awaiting the story to be completed. Now, I'm eagerly awaiting it again. Glad you brought it back.

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

I got 1 question, how many hands do Raymond have?? "He gathered her long red hair in a tail and wrapped it around his hand, using it to pull her up so she was on her hands and knees with her head thrown back. He took her breasts in one hand and frantically rubbed her clit with the other."

Right about here he uses 3, i'm guessing that he uses the forth to keep himself stable during the vigorous sex?

very good story looking forward to reading more of it