All Comments on 'Magic, Love, Family Pt. 02'

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Anonymousover 3 years ago

HOT HOT HOT

More Please!

duskyhaze over 3 years ago

I am hooked!!!! Thanks so much!!!

Fuzzy_Kbear over 3 years ago

Good to see this story back can't wait for pt.03!

Midge99 over 3 years ago

Great job.

I love the rich world you have created. The added tension you have between the carters is great, you didn't just throw them in bed together. Anticipation.... I Love it. And the over all world intrigue is very exciting. You have a winner on your hands. Eager for more.

Darkmantim over 3 years ago

Nice cliffhanger

Anonymousover 3 years ago

rapidly climbing the leaderboards

Before I read it I was surprised how rapidly this story had found itself in the top ten lists for its categories. After I read it, I was like, yeah that makes sense.

Nice teasing development, nice world building. Keep it up!

Anonymousabout 3 years ago

Raymond is a ...

Weinie wart! Ok...seriously, is he a special needs child walking around in a mans body or just a petulant moron who walks around with a sword? Story has potential, but unless the protagonist gets smarter, it won't matter.

Sl33pingforest over 2 years ago

Late to the party but this is great so far.

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