All Comments on 'Magic, Love, Family Pt. 03'
by tmark0099
- 11 Comments
MasterPDover 3 years agoI love this story. It has a good pace and is well written. I like the idea of a map and character overview. But not if it means I have to wait longer for chapter 4. Im selfish like that ;)
Fuzzy_Kbearover 3 years agoI've been waiting rather impatiently... Lol for this and more. Yes! to the map and character/overview chapter. I also have a presumption as to Raymond's future!?! I will send that directly and not just comment on it here, but I believe you have (foretold) of what I think, and I can't wait for further chapters! Thanks for the entertainment!
Anonymousover 3 years agoIs the threesome incest?......pls make it an incestous threesome......lovin it....waiting😍😍😍
Anonymousover 3 years agoI was surprised.....like really surprised to see this type of story on literotica.
It's not just sex and I quite like it. The contents are detailed which I don't see in 99% of the fictional stories.
And ...loved the way you write, specially the way u described the emotions between all the family members.... specially Sussanne.(she's become my fav.). Waiting for Ray's relationship with her progress to that of an inseparable lovers.
The characters are all sweet.
Anyways..... waiting for the next beautiful creation of yours.
GOOD LUCK
alaluover 3 years agoIt has been a pleasure working with you (and continuing to do so). I am a big fan of the series, which you already know. :-) You are an excellent storyteller!
Anonymousabout 3 years agoI like the premise of the story and most of the characters, but if the boy is your primary character, he's almost enough to make me stop reading any further. He seems like a self-centered arse without a though in his brain pan. I really hope the character becomes a lot more wise and decent, otherwise, I don't think I can justify spending more time with this story. I hope you continue to write. Cheers!
Sl33pingforestover 2 years agoSo im just getting into this and it's awesome I'll def purchase I'd ya turn it into a novel after the necessary changes.
Anonymous3 months agoI think he’s a whiny wuss. I hate his character development he’s useless and the story doesn’t make sense.
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