All Comments on 'Magic Madness'

Too short and not enough action. There were several directions you could have gone in for this tale, all of which would have made it longer and more interesting. You could even have written several chapters featuring a different treatment or new side effects for previous treatments.

In short intriguing but disappointing.

Far too short, but a good start. As a prologue of sorts, it set up the characters in a nice way, and was far better than an information dump like a lot of authors do.

Still, it could have done with more detail or more interaction between the wizard and princess. Or something of the other customers and what they were wanting to buy. Basically, the story needs some fleshing out.

As the first chapter in a twenty-chapter story, I think it was enjoyable though short. I wouldn't have posted it all by itself because that just magnifies its brevity. Now I'm hoping the next dozen chapters drop quickly so I can enjoy the tale and see what happens next.

It almost got me off. Too short!

Just started reading it and I really enjoyed it. You have a great sense of humor and know how to keep the conversation flowing easily between your characters. Thanks for the laughs.

J.D.