All Comments on 'Magic Man in Mexico'

This story suffers from a common mistake/flaw seen at various times. That of a full line of jibberish jumbled letters of no meaning and with no indication which character says it like this one:

"Muuhiooww! Uuhng! Hoooo! Hoooo! Uuhnng!"

but you definitely need to continue this story. It is going to be interesting to see how you are going to steer this girl to other men upon your return and how you are going to live with your conscience with your family.

It's a great tale about an apparent great tail ::smirk:: I've read it a couple of times and had no trouble understanding that it was the female uttering the "gibberish". I like the way that you have attempted to approximate the sounds she made with her vocal cords in partial paralysis from the intensity of her climax. I, too, await the sequel to see how you have handled what you hinted at being a rather long term affair.