All Comments on 'Magical Night in the Sky Bus'

I love DeFleur stories!

Would've been so much better if Keith wasn't involved

Great concept but complicated writing style. It made the story difficult to follow.

I like story idea. The writing style though makes it difficult to follow. Sometimes it's just grammatical, orthographic mistakes. Sometimes it's unclear how the sentences are connected because a reference is missing or it jumps to one that the reader isn't expecting, his focus being somewhere else.

First of your stories I read.

I liked it, 5 stars, I agree it was a little hard to follow at times, but not impossible. Will definitely be checking out more of your stories. Thanks for Sharing!