All Comments on 'Magical Schoolgirl, Alice Black'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Second chapter

Definitely write a second chapter.

Writer2000Writer2000over 6 years ago
A clever idea

Very funny!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
favorited

Really liked how Melina and the teacher laughed at Alice's expense. Definitely worth a second chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Stopped Reading at the Snyopsis

If, at the very beginning, you can't tell the difference between a broom-stick riding-ugly old hag and a part of speech, I'm not going to waste my time reading a piece of ILiterotica!

Not rated!

AnonymousAnonymous9 days ago

Unnecessary anal

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