All Comments on 'Magister Ch. 02'

I absolutely love this story!

I'm working on the end of chapter three right now. Appreciate all those who rate, and especially those who comment.

Really enjoyed reading this, looking forward to the next chapter.

i'm enjoying this one - is there more?

It is pretty customary to leave commentary after reading something you liked on another writing forum I belong to. I'm pretty surprised there aren't more for this story!

I'll admit, I don't really find an interest in a lot of restraint sex, I like non-consensual though. I really like the character. You have developed him a lot more than you have her, which is nice because well, he sounds hot. :) I like how he uses magic and puts a really fun twist to this story that I've not ever really read before. It would be interesting to be with a mage. . .

We haven't gotten to any lovemaking yet in your story. I'm hoping there will be some in the chapters to come!

I gave you five points. A commented/critiqued in return for commenting on my first serious attempt at writing erotic fiction. Keep up the good work!