All Comments on 'Magnanimous'

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Richie4110Richie4110over 6 years ago
Compelling!

You handled this unusual subject in a thoughtful manner. I didn’t feel any pervasion as I read it; I woundered how you would get there. Now I wonder how the relationship with Henry will work out.

Thank you for sharing your talent.

bigdnc13bigdnc13over 6 years ago
Very well done,

as was the first chapter. I'd love to see a third chapter to complete the story. I also would like to see longer Romance story by you.

ranec1ranec1over 5 years ago
Mean As!!

Chur bro awesome story

chytownchytownover 4 years ago
Great Follow-Up****

Thanks for sharing.

SANDMAN786SANDMAN786over 3 years ago
more

Write another story but this time write about hoe Henry leaves her for another woman. And how the son beats henry to an inch of his life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

“Wow, my son is mad at me because I fucked his friend. Must be because he can’t get any bitches”. What?

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Free-lance writer who enjoys reading mostly non-fiction but also Nicholas Sparks romance novels and "serious" lit (John Updike, Irwin Shaw, Philip Roth, Herman Wouk). I enjoy writing these stories because it entertains me as well as the readership. Lit is unique in that wri...