All Comments on 'Magnificent Little Sister Mia'

Good stuff all around.

I'm a breast man.

That said, I love breasts small, so miss were less than perfect for me, but that's me.

I could have done without the mention of penis size. I believe for most reader's, talking about penis size should be more taboo than fucking your sister (that's kind of a joke, the sister part, not penis size).

The narrative is stilled, uneasy. As the authors reads through his story before publication, read for awkward, unrealistic phrasing and sentence structure.

If the focus of a sentence is centered on one person, idea, or topic, the the focus Shane's to someone else, a different idea or topic, start a new paragraph.

I hope I'm not being overly critical. I liked this story, and will now be checking out this writer's other works. Maybe my comment will make this author's writing even more enjoyable.

Love it, but learn about this little piece of anatomy called the Clitoris. Women rarely orgasm from penetrative sex alone. Otherwise, great story

Loved the build-up and his hesitation to take her.

Very realistic. Siblings close in age often have feelings they try to keep in check. The right circumstances can bring them out. Andrew truly loves and cherishes Mia.and vice versa. They must be very careful not to get caught.

Mia and Andrew sure get it on, and do such an amazing job in pleasing each other. They are good at oral sex -- her blowing him and him eating her out. I keep thinking maybe Andrew has a light dusting ion chest hair for that sexy young man chest, something for Mia's breasts to caress. And when she steadies herself by putting her hands down ion his chest, maybe she can stroke the chest hair she finds there. sexy!

The build up, the details about licking breasts and pussy..all amazing

Nice build up and great detail of him taking her

The part which let it down of the bit about birth control.

Them being so worked up,they just take the risk ?

This is story land no VD or babies here.

What a beautiful and exciting story.

Can’t wait to see where this goes.

5 stars!

Need to be part of a nice romantic, love story including another sister!

Nice story. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you.

Amazing story! Thoroughly enjoyed it.

Great story and we'll put together and I hope it continues. Look forward to reading the future developments of their young taboo relationship.

Hawt!

WOW! Excellent. Very believable. Need next chapter.

I always love a good brother and sister story. Thanks for sharing this story with us.

Very hot 🤩

Beautifully written and so well paced. So hot in almost melted my lap top! More please.

Nicely done!

A good 5 stars 🌟

Bill S.

Cute und Fun!!!!!

10/10!!!!!

Absolutely loved this story. Well written. Erotic. Sisters are so hot - if they want to be.

5 stars.

Please write more - in the 2, 3, 4 page length.

I really liked this story.

Thank you...

Delightful. Very well done, even if a bit heavy into wish fulfillment.

5 Stars

I don't much like 1 pagers! It takes something about 2+ pages at least to get me going! This was really worth reading again! Now got my password problem sorted I can say "Well done & thx.", and not post as Anonymous.

Loved it story

One more chapter.