All Comments on 'Magnus and His Family Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Very good story

They must be a couple; please don't get her back to Magnus

Oldergenteman69Oldergenteman69about 4 years ago
Very Good

What a great story! I really enjoyed it when she let him take her in the ass, something I have yet to do.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great story

Great story. I gave you another 5 stars.

I like the way Paul licking his mother and inhaling the heady odor of her hairy pussy.

You could continue this story by having Magnus and his wife learns that they both having incestuous relationships with their children. And that brought them back together as family.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Adds structure

On the one hand, I was a tad disappointed about the feeling or repetition from Kristen/Mangus' side of the story, but on the other, I greatly appreciate the symmetry it adds to the whole. The writing, and the sex, is great as usual!

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Hi! I'm Kathryn M. Burke. I've written about a dozen novels of love and sex, all published on Amazon (print and ebook). I'm really into unconventional relationships--polygamy, polyamory, intergenerational sex, etc. But I like to tell stories of people's feelings, not just thei...

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