All Comments on 'Magnus and His Family'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Amazing

Can't wait to read more from you... thank you! Well-written and amazing as always.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
re: Magnus and His Family (Chapter 1)

I really, really, really, REALLY hate opening a story and only then find out it's not a complete story. What it tells me is that the writer doesn't give a fuck about its own story or the readers.

cindyp1976cindyp1976about 4 years ago
Really good

I really loved this story and I hope you continue to write it and turn it into a series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
I hope

this will be a story about how the son and the mother became a couple as well as the Father-Daughter, the interactions between the two couples and their love life

Please think about this, we don't have much stories like this.

ScrapYardPileScrapYardPileabout 4 years ago
A Good Read

Well done. Nicely thought out and written. Hope to see more in this series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Very exciting

Very exciting story. I gave you 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Enough already

Magnus is the stupidest name you could have come up with. I'm really getting sick of seeing it posted.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Nice story. Minor detail. Manhattan College is not a women’s college.

scholarguyscholarguyover 2 years ago

i liked this story

derrick57751derrick57751over 2 years ago

Great start to the series!

papa576977papa576977almost 2 years ago

I loved the first intallment. Being the youngest of my family I was reminded of the time my two older sisters and my mom taught me how to please a woman.

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Hi! I'm Kathryn M. Burke. I've written about a dozen novels of love and sex, all published on Amazon (print and ebook). I'm really into unconventional relationships--polygamy, polyamory, intergenerational sex, etc. But I like to tell stories of people's feelings, not just thei...

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