All Comments on 'Maid of Dishonour'

Yeah that was hardly with the time to read it.

I wish I had an older brother to do this with fuck

Learn what a sentence is. Without that knowledge, there's no point in pretending you can make an interesting plot.

After you can form an actual sentence on a regular basis, then you can work on coming up with something worth reading. I'm thinking you probably won't be capable of doing either.

This is really fine writing!

please continue

Wish I had younger sister to do this with. Good story.

Probably gonna be messy and embarrassing as she stands in church with her brother's cum leaking from her pussy. Will her beautiful dress stain? How would she explain that? Will she fuck her brother again...and again...and again? The baby she wants to have...will it be her brother's or her husband's? Inquiring minds want to know.

What the fuck does cageysea9725 know anyway. He must be a fucking English professor.

I think this story is HOT!

Pretty bad...2 Stars!