All Comments on 'Maid to Measure'

Mister or Miss, how long did you take to write this story? I mean seriously...what the hell were you thinking when you put this up? To be honest the first paragraph was pretty decent, it was ok. But the rest was just awful. I hope you work on your story-telling, describe the scene more.

Less talking, more descriptions.

Sigh, and I even threw in a 'wry plot twist' with Pina as lady boy..oh well..back to my republishing Da Vinci Code I suppose!

For a first effort this is not bad. Needs more details, sights, sounds, inner thoughts of the characters, etc.

Thankyou for your thoughtful critique Chili Peeler, and thankyou for having the cajones to post under your name and not as 'anonymous'.

The reason is it so 'wordy' is because I wanted the characters to own their actions and words...all very Zen I know. Most stories here post their characters as always 'well fit', I gave that part minimal address and cut straight to the chase, oh and I threw in the Oprah effect re Pina's continued employ with the family! LOL!! Gratuitous warm and fuzzy on my part!

This story was hilarious. I like the lesbian daughters and the "twist" in the story. It was tough reading the dialogue by the maid. Did you have to make him/her sound so illiterate? Making her speak better English would not make the story any less interesting. I wonder what would happened when the mom comes home and joins in on the fun. Woohoo! Looking forward to the next chapter.

It's a fun story, and still erotic. Sometimes different isn't always appreciatated. Keep it going, good writing.

Thankyou for your thoughts folks and thankyou to who realized this was a bit of a pisstake. The maid is quite literate to anon #1 poster..I have a fetish for broken English..and yes..I did have concerns about being patronizing re Pina..LOL!..Did you know it's two pages? Read again

im a filipina, and filipinas does'nt talk that way, we dont say words like "por favor", we are'nt mexicans....

Stupid and preposterous.

Story was good but she is supposed to be filipina as you said but you had her talking like a mexican whore. You need to learn the english slang the filipinos use and the mexicans. Thought there for awhile this could be true but I got dissapointed with the so called Pinay.

I loved this wish it was me there to take all of them on

I have never been so quickly turned on by any story on this site. I really hope you continue writing more like this, because you just became possibly my favorite writer on here.

Though the Philipinnes were ruled by Spain for hundreds of years filipinos dont speak much if any true Spanish ... at best there are a few words integrated in tagalog ( their dialect though it too has variations region to region ) such as Kumusta instead of Como Esta etc ... so when you used Spanish in the begining of the storyline you lost me as a reader because the maidwas no longer filipina in my eyes but some form of latina ... and I didnt read beyond her confession of being a Lesbian

my sister is a les I caught here with a sex toy and she let me spunk in her ass as she done her cunt it was wonderfull

After 4 months of my 58 year old Mexican housekeeper making eyes at me, she finally broke my resistance and seduced me for sex. While she was a bit chunky and curvy, she was sexy and made my cock throb super hard, and was expert at oral cock foreplay and edging me. She loved how I slobbered all over her hairy pussy and made her cum in my mouth multiple times, then gave her ultimate pleasure drilling her deep & wide with my big thick penis! She made me bust my nut so hard, and wanted me to pull out and spurt on her tits so she could see how much she could make me cum!

Concept is good, original. But the shear amount of insulting and calling each other whore, is a real let down. Are there really people who get off on this shit ?

This should be under trans. Absolutely disgusting. I hate ladyboys. Makes me want to puke. Worst story ever