All Comments on 'Maid To Take'

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riteonriteonabout 20 years ago
Excellent

Very good story. It really turned me on. I think that you could have expanded on the sex scenes they seemed to be a little short when the initial descriptions were very good.

Thanks for this and keep 'em coming.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Oral Sex

If you described the oral sex more, that would be good. I really liked the leadup, but when you discussed the man going down on Maya, an expansion would have been good. I enjoyed it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
GREAT STORY

gREAT STORY-IT MAKES ME CUM!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Good one

Maya sounds like a sexy bitch.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
The Best!

Its very good! Nice story. Simply the best!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Excellent

I love the breast description.Oral sex, not that much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Lovely

this was simply awesome, very erotic

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Very nice story, apart from the pretentious comments about language.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I personally like the skimpy sex details, because the main character said he likes foreplay a lot, and this was a first person account so ofcourse he would talk about the foreplay more. Loved it

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