by fluidline1
Very good story. It really turned me on. I think that you could have expanded on the sex scenes they seemed to be a little short when the initial descriptions were very good.
Thanks for this and keep 'em coming.
If you described the oral sex more, that would be good. I really liked the leadup, but when you discussed the man going down on Maya, an expansion would have been good. I enjoyed it!
I personally like the skimpy sex details, because the main character said he likes foreplay a lot, and this was a first person account so ofcourse he would talk about the foreplay more. Loved it