by Sabledrake
What a lovely story! Really erotic and romantic. The characters were so alive and really in love. I hope we get to read more about them.
Tia
I loved it! You are such a good story teller. I was totally brought into their world and now I have to know more about them both and what will happen next. If only I could write like this. Really wonderful work.
Such eloquent language. And such a sweet build up and climax.
Nicely done.
The wonder is why do I continue to try to write, when the competition is this good? And then I tell myself, keep writing, because only by writing will I improve.
A superb story, elegantly told. Colour me jealous!
Alex
You have an incredible writing talent. Thanks for sharing your fantasy world with us.
I truly enjoyed this story. I was surprised by it flowing as smoothly as it does. Most fantasy bores me but this story didn't. Keep it up.
Cat
I haven't read anything like this in a long time, and I'm now motivated to read more of your work. You have a true gift for description and I especially appreciated the little bits of intrigue sprinkled throughout the story. Very nice work. Thanks for sharing.
~lucky
Fantastic, Christine!
Makes me want to know more about the characters... especially how did the girl get put under an enchantment to become a sword? Wonderful, sensual lovemaking... a nice change of pace from your other stories (not that the others aren't as good, mind you!). Keep up the great work!