All Comments on 'Majutsu-shi no Chikara Ch. 01'

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abiostudent3abiostudent3over 2 years ago

... Well that got surreal. Huh.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

OK.

Now this story has some serious promise!

5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It seems the tables have turned although I must admit that you happily managed to really throw me for a loop on this one. I strangely understand and accept exactly what Damon was trying to convey. It is a wonderful addition to a story like this one but it really sucks when it is your actual thought process and life. I am so amped for your next chapter to see how this plays out. A huge 5 ⭐️ effort on this one without any doubt.

TheFeveredHungerTheFeveredHungerover 2 years agoAuthor

...Sigh... Yeah, I *could* put trigger warnings on my content... caveat emptor.

I'm a little chagrined to have commented anonymously... I already argued with myself on another post - so it feels a little vainglorious to continue in the same style. Let's face it - any anonymous replies *must* have been posted by me... how else would I placate my fragile egomania? This just feels... I don't know... resigned? The audience doesn't want accolades! They want blood in the sand! They want bitter feuding! They want falling heroes and disgraced celebrities! They want the elite to suffer as they have suffered! Don't applaud, it only encourages the trolls.

AnonymousAnonymous14 days ago

Great start. Going on now.

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https://www.patreon.com/damceon "Sorcerer's" series - a slow-burn epic. "Devil's House" series - a casual side-project with very little commitment. UPDATE: 2024.04.29 - CH 16 is queued-up and cycling. Only about 23% trimmed from the manuscript version. So, maybe still prett...

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