All Comments on 'Make It Out Alive'

Great story! I'd like to hear more about these characters.

Great story! There's not enough stories with a western genre being written these days, so I hope you'll be writing/submitting more soon. Thanks!

BB this is one of the best western themed stories I have read. Your idea of a sequel sounds good as many other writers use that path rather than a story detailing the life of the main character before they went straight. Reading about the life of someone as good as Brad Philllips is a sound thought,

I really enjoyed this. Five stars, well done.

This would make a very good story going forward. Really like this kind of reading. Thank you for this

Good story, thanks for sharing it with us. Looking forward to your next.

Go forward, Brad has enough back-story,

THANK YOU for an entertaining story.

Be well and happy.

I'd love to read both a prequel And a sequel. 5 stars for this

Great story! Well writen with interesting and belivable charachters. Well developed story line from start to finish. I can't imagine improving the story line by addint to it. I hope to see other stories from you in the near future! Thanks, DSE.

Nice western tale! 5 stars. Both a prequel and a sequel are in order if you are of a mind to make us another gift of your talent.

Enjoyed it start to finish.

Thank you

Good story. A little predictable but very good parts to it. The details or little side stories (and secondary characters) make it a much more complete tale. Thank you. Looking forward to more (hopefully)

Usually I'm not a huge fan of the western genre but I think this is absolutely marvellous. Indeed, it is my favourite of your stories and a sequel or two would be most welcome.

Great story, nicely written. You'll give Ronde a run for his money. Really enjoyed this tale. Thank you

Great story! Curious to know if anyone ever recognizes Blondie; a rather distinctive horse.

Great job. Thank You

Excellent. Nice story, well told.

Wonderful story !!

Great story. I agree that you and Ronde might compete, but a better idea might be to be each other's editors and maybe collaborate on a story some day. You are both great.

a cliche western and not a very good one.

Fabulous! My favorite genre, westerns. I hope you write a prequel and a sequel. I look forward to reading both.

Well thought out. Good character development and plot. Set well in tom and place. But a little proofreading would have helped. Horses have reins, not reigns- be careful of spell check, you end up with the wrong word but spelled correctly. Several other similar mistakes detract from an otherwise very strong story. Keep up the writing and thanks for your time and effort.

Great period piece! I enjoyed your style, mixing narrative with dialogue to help bring it to life. There's not a good category on this site for a prequel, given you already revealed his only experience with women was with prostitutes. I vote sequel! 4.8*

I liked it, but I feel like there would have been an opportunity for Brad to reflect on his new chance, when they fought the rustlers. Something along the lines of him getting a new chance and they didn't.

5/5

Given a choice, I would prefer a sequel.

Wow, it was great reading a well written Western story again. Well told. 5*.

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