All Comments on 'Make It Up To Me'

Beautiful. Keep the story going please. That was too sexy to end there.

Mmmm.... Damn that was hot!

can't wait for part 2 but please give further history on there background

Great story! Please let it continue!

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Hot! And an enjoyable storyline to tie it together, can't get much better than that. :) Added to favorites- hope to read more from you.

Stunning. Have shared it with my dear friend Deb, who knows. ;-)

I am working on the second chapter but I was busy finishing up another story that I recently posted and am waiting to get approved. Thank you all for your comments! Feedback is important to me. Keep reading!

But Belle, there's no such word as 'spreaded'. 'Spread' is both the present and past tenses. Apart from that, I quite enjoyed the story which was fun. However, why is in these stories that mothers alway phone while the narrator/heroine/partner is having sex? Do they have some kind of built-in "my-daughter's-having-sex-right-now" radar?. Just a thought.

Patiently waiting on the next part. I hope Kiera sticks around.

Is the second chapter coming any time soon?

I really loved this story. A while back you said that it would be a part two. Is that still happening or no? I really hope you continue. I'd love to know what happened with Kiera and Ashley.